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In a crowded room,
But no one hears me screaming,
Hundreds of people surround me,
But I've never felt so alone.

I don't need just anyone,
But god, do I need someone,
Why can I long for people,
But never say a word.

I tell myself I'm stronger than that,
And hate to admit I'm weak,
That I may wake up one day,
To find it is true.

That maybe I do need someone to hear me scream,
And scream with me as loud as they can,
Till our eardrums burst from the sound,
And drown out all my lonliness.
Just a poem I wrote about lonliness... I'm not lonely or anything, it's just a song I was listening to got me in the mood to write this-- "Welcome to my Life" by Simple Plan.
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LastxLullabyxx Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hope you don't mind but i used this for a pic i did, i added your name to the bottom though it's very relatable this poem
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:iconi43:
I like this poem a lot. I can really relate to the feelings conveyed in it. Loneliness is no stranger to me. Great job with the poem!
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EmperorKarino Jul 2, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
good job
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:iconoddsausage:
:w00t!: really like it
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:iconkiwipeaches:
Love it! <33 I'd rant on too, but hyperism said it all. xD
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:iconkiwipeaches:
'Cept the part about bad music. o_O
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:iconhyperism:
pssssh it is bad :P

but yes ranting is damn good fun 8D
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:iconkiwipeaches:
Whoo ranting! 8D xD
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:iconhyperism:
alright, this poem is seriously so good and powerful that I'm going to fast forward my remarks of adding the e to loneliness and saying something like "Simple Plan? SIMPLE PLAN??? Natasha, you can do so much better, they're worse than Green Day and FOB put together" EVEN THOUGH I just said all those things which you should ignore because your poem is sososo AMAZING.

it's so small, but such few words can mean so much. the amount of power put into your poem is astounding. I can totally feel the emotion and pain, sometimes I can even relate. this poem is SO good that I can actually write sentences that are deep and meaningful with BIG WORDS in them not involving music, nifty, or gnar-bars. CONGRATULATIONS :faint:
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